--Elionius Monk, The Thinking Thebes-man
Tuesday, November 18, 2008
Scandal in the Royal Family
After the epic dual of Eteocles and Polynices, citizens of Thebes were content to follow the orders of the newly crowned ruler, Creon. Such orders were that Eteocles was to be given an honorable burial, for he died a patriot, but Polynices was to be denied a proper burial. Creon labeled him as a traitor to his homeland and sentenced his corpse to be devoured by carrion animals. We, citizens of Thebes, thought the matter was over and done. Ah, but we were wrong! Yesterday, a thin layer of dirt was found over Polynices' remains. No one knew who would dare defy the kings orders in such a brazen way. But then a guard came forward, claiming to have seen Antigone, daughter of Oedipus and sister to Polynices, burying the body. Most people accused of such a heinous crime would be quick to denounce it, but Antigone spread no blame, saying "I avow it; I make no denial". Now, we ponderous townsmen are left to take sides. Was the maiden Antigone, who was engaged to prince Haimon, simply defending the honor of her family and indeed her people? Or rather was she rashly disobeying the clear orders of a superior? Her judgement, and ours, awaits.
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7 comments:
Hey I came up with a greek name, too! The quotes I used weren't actually from the text, do you think that's okay?
You used my quote!!
But bravo, I like how you've captured a particular voice that fits very well with the ancient context of the story yet resembles the modern journalistic style.
I see great things in your future Elionius.
I really enjoyed your article. I don't know what else to say. Cecilia pretty much covered it. :)
Very well done, I really like your writing style, as it is elegant and flowing, with an impressive repetoire of vocabulary.
I like it how you leave it up to the reader to decide whether Antigone was right or not. Obviously, with a King like Creon, the newspaper wouldn't be able to just say anything about the wisdom of a King's decree.
Superb
hey i like that your inspired by Thelonious Monk... haha he's a super jazzy guy:)
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